Monday, September 7, 2009

FIRST DATE


"They say that good things take time
but really good things happen in a blink of an eye.

as the chances to meet somebody like her

were one in a million to me."




Life moves on but in between it brings some moments which makes us realises the value of our life,its that moment when we wish time to stand still.

Tarang was meeting Saira outside the school for the first time and thus it was named as their FIRST DATE by the trop , but a date outside , where , when , how??? keeps on flocking Tarang's mind but ultimately after discussion with Samit and Anvit , Papu's Resturant was zeroed in at 2:00 clock immediately after school gets over , at home it can be viewed as some preprations for coming Cultural day function.Everything was planned but the resturant was n't very near so convince ,still remained a problem but ' God help those, who are in love ' (part of Tarang's theory ) a friend offered his kinectic honda. Everything was well planned and scheduled two days after .
Saira took four intervals to get convinced about the same but one day before their big date she announced that the owner of Papu's resturant is her distant relative and if they are caught things wouldnot remain so pleasant.
"This was a severe prolem ,everyone knows everyone in small city like ours , "claimed Tarang but promised her that there date would not be cancelled .

All the last periods that day went finding a new and safer place but nothing got finalised , but after a lot of discussions Aisha's residence was decided as the venue as her parents were out of city for two days and she stays with her dadi. 'But then it will not be counted as an Official date' Gauri said , creating more confusion but anyways Aisha 's not going to disturb them .
Their big day came and the school got over and suddenly they both landed at Aisha's place , this was their srategy to have maximium time but as soon as they reached her place ,Aisha's parents were already home but still they went inside , the three of them enjoyed a lot but their official date was called off for time being.

Tarang's bad luck
Aisha's enjoyment





12 comments:

  1. BAD LUCK....bt

    OSUM man !!
    very beautifully written.....seriously
    carry on d GOOOD WRK !! :)

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  2. thank u thank u ..
    will do tht buddy

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  3. nyc sketch..who made it??i realli liked it!!n the post is nyc bt....(lol..as u knw i love 2 criticize so..)smthng is missing..i dont knw wat bt ha dere is...:P:P:P

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  4. of course I believe in originality so everything is done by me..
    he he ..
    nd thanx for bein critical ..

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  5. bt i want u 2 be regular n write often bcoz i really wait 4 new posts n ha ur diary is really very touching...

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  6. thank u bt reading my personal diary z not fair...

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  7. Hey Dude ,just started reading your story its amazing.
    keep posting.

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  8. innocent yet intriguing..!!a bit ...yu knw..jst a bit ..itna sa..amateur-ly compiled..
    but...dude,hatz off for yr efforts...yu doing relly gr8..yu knw..
    hav to say...i dnt hav such patience..i cdnt hav reachd so far,,gud luck!!

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